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Hunters of Venice: Autumn Equinox (Part One)

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Akira
CS23X
Friki Tiki
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Friki Tiki

Friki Tiki

Very proud of this one, ladies and gentlemn. Here it is, Chapter 5!
Any errors, please let me know, READ & RESPOND!!

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Last edited by Friki Tiki on Mon Jul 26, 2010 11:06 pm; edited 2 times in total

CS23X

CS23X

I was very impressed with this chapter and I did not notice any errors. I enjoyed that you had 3 hunters each having totally different personalities, it made the fight much more interesting.

Favorite Quote "I was taught that hitting girls was wrong" "But you're really nasty" XD

Friki Tiki

Friki Tiki

posted the raw version of page 8, "someone" was supposed to let me know of this error...

Akira

Akira

Interesting Chapter, I'll have to read the one's previous though...I'm quite confused xD
However, I do especially like the angles that you draw (For example, on page 9, the third panel)
Nice comic Very Happy

Friki Tiki

Friki Tiki

ty, and btw, my DA account has all of my comics so check it out at ur convenience Very Happy
http://frikitiki.deviantart.com/

Inari

Inari

gotta say, you have a ton of potential;
Though your style is still developing, your characters are consistent and
you do not have the sailor moon style where all your characters look the same,
which is typically the case for aspiring artist. So keep practicing, can't
wait to see where you will end up.

SCK[KC]

SCK[KC]

I must agree with Inari, you have absolutely fantastic potential. And well, I already posted my comment back at NUU, too lazy to copy and paste it here =) But overall this was indeffinetly one of the most enjoyable chapters yet. I miss those good ol' inverse pictures usually in the end though - althought this is a "part 1" I still think it very much needs one.

Friki Tiki

Friki Tiki

yeah, after thinking about my future chapters, i won't have enough recurring characters to keep it consistent, Razz

Karasu

Karasu
Admin

Amazing chapter, as always. Very Happy

Weakjounin

Weakjounin

Epic chapter ^^
nice dude, I can't wait for the next chapter
now I'm inspired to work on my manga now xD

Friki Tiki

Friki Tiki

update, the exciting conclusion to autumn equinox will be up on tuesday Very Happy

Akira

Akira

Can't wait~

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