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Story Series I'm Working On

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1 Story Series I'm Working On on Sat Aug 21, 2010 8:27 am

Okay, I'm a writer, and I have no viewers whatsoever to get feedback or anything. In any case, I wanted to share some stuff. This is a story arc I'm working on to introduce a new character.

Part 1 http://fav.me/d2qxhpj
Part 2 http://fav.me/d2upfe3
Part 3 http://fav.me/d2vrxnb

Comments are appreciated, because I really would like to get some viewers who like and actually read my work

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2 Re: Story Series I'm Working On on Sat Aug 21, 2010 4:52 pm

Interesting story, there are a few spelling errors here and there but nothing big. Overall I really like the description used throughout the story. I don't find it to be predictable and its written quite well~

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