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Hunters of Venice: Autumn Equinox (Part Two)

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Karasu

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That was an amazing chapter, perhaps your best one yet! *super excited* please make more soon! Epic


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Corebalt: " And Karasu's Furret sweep'd my entire team. Embarassed "
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"HOLY FUCK GODFREY WHAT THE FUCK AWW SHIT HOLY HELL JUST OH MY FUCKING GOD?!!!!"

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HOLYSHITTHISISLIKETHEBESTGODDAMNCOMICEVER YEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWHHH!!

Seriously though, this is like the epicest thing, ever. Also, Raphaels face in the third panel of the third page is awesome. Razz
I mean, honestly. Just epic.

Also, Raph has a GIIIIIIIIRRRRLLFFFFRIENDDDD.

No wait.
No he does not.
She died. Twisted Evil

Althought, again, I must say, althought it again is not a full chapter, I think it needs an inverse colored completely black page with someone drawn with white. I really loved those pages.



Last edited by SCK[NU] on Wed Aug 25, 2010 4:43 pm; edited 1 time in total

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well sck, the last two chapters may not have had the inverted char pic but i figured an additional page of storytelling would make up for it Razz

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I almost cried you asshole
:/ that was really good, imo you're the master of storytelling
@Majeh: IKR? IKR? IKR?

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Oh fuck dude... that was depressing. In a good way though! XD

Me: "Oh cool, Raph made peace with them. Tha- wah?! Godfrey no!"

Really good job Tiki, I think you have a genuine epic on your hands. ^^

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My only issue still is the panel layouts. They flow but still could use work, oh- and definitely emphasize on major moments with bigger panels. It helps impact it into our skulls and all. Other than that, great job dude - keep it up! I'll be waiting patiently for the next chapter. =]

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I fucken hate Godfrey. He seemed like such a cool guy... but he's an asshole Crying or Very sad

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Karasu

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*Attacks weakjounin with a shovel*

In other news:

Godfrey's awesome! Razz


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IKR Godfrey is like totally awesome.
I lied, Godfrey is the god of assholes and douchebags.
he's the living embodiment of asshole

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